
A Muddled Sci-Fi With Some Heart..
Braxley is at times a monotone story, but with it’s heartwarming surprises.
SYNOPSIS
Scorned by the realization his daughter isn’t his biologically, Braxley Tomlinson makes a move to take Sasha away from her lying mother.
Things go awry when he’s chased into an alternate dimension by an active shooter.
Trapped under a dome for a period of no less than five years, Braxley finds any way he can to get back to his daughter on the other side.
Not the Best Start…
This book I honestly liked more than I thought I would. At first the writing felt a little too disconnected for my tastes. The story begins with the moment Braxley learns that he is infertile, leading him to the conclusion that his daughter is not biologically his. As I began to read this event, his next actions lacked emotion. The words on the page were monotone, giving me the sense that Braxley was not at all phased by the knowledge that his wife broke their vows by having an affair. Braxley continues to make decision after decision over what should have been complex situations without a second thought.
MORE DETAILS
Word Count (rounded)~ ?
Page Count: 340
Genres: Sci-Fi
When he learns his daughter is not his because his wife had an affair, at that moment Braxley announces he is taking their daughter away. He then decides he will take her to his parents house, but that he needs to go to work first and therefore leaves his ten-year-old daughter in a hotel room. As the description explains, it is on his way that he is chased by a shooter and finds himself suddenly in an alternate reality where he is told he will have to serve a 5 year sentence before he is allowed to return home.
When someone finds themselves trapped in an unfamiliar place, I would expect them to react in confusion, anger, or frustration. Braxley simply took all of this new information in stride and proceeded, only short mentions in the story reminding the reader that he did in fact want to return home.
The Heart of the Story…
Although Braxleys part of this story left me empty, it was his daughter Sasha that saved this book for me. Sasha is I believe 10 years old and in her chapters the story follows her as she learns to cope with the trauma of believing she was abandoned by her father Braxley. After her abandonment, she is returned to her mother and faces a new challenge as she becomes physically abusive towards Sasha. As her story progressed, I started to take an interest in the book. There were times where the story still felt staged, actions without reason occurring, but I started to get attached to Sasha and the characters around and wished for their happiness.
A Unclear Picture…
Sasha’s story was wonderful to read, but when the story would return to Braxley I would get confused all over again. The story with Braxley was intriguing, but the world building and the technology in this alternate reality needed to be more fleshed out. New machines, rules, and characters were constantly thrown my way without much explanation, and in the end I didn’t have a clear picture of Braxley or the alternate dimension he was imprisoned in. The characters around him felt interchangeable and I wish I was able to get more information about them to develop their personalities. I believe the main issue was that the timeline stretched over multiple years and although Sasha’s story progression felt natural, Braxley’s felt rushed in order to keep his story in line with Sasha’s.
My Rating…
Although I didn’t connect with the sci-fi element of the story, I did connect with Sasha’s story enough where reading this book was actually really enjoyable and didn’t feel like a chore to finish if the author were to revisit the book and maybe release some kind of special edition or extended version I would reread it immediately. It’s because of that that my personal rating for this book is two stars because I really did love Sasha’s story but not enough to reread this book.
The next book I’m reading is “A Game of Thrones”, the famous epic fantasy by George R.R. Martin.

