The Wilder Women by Ruth Emmie Lang

A beautiful story that falls a little short…

The Wilder Women is a beautiful story about a unique family that seems to lose focus in its mystery.

SYNOPSIS

Five years ago, Nora Wilder disappeared. The older of her two daughters, Zadie, should have seen it coming, because she can literally see things coming. But not even her psychic abilities were able to prevent their mother from vanishing one morning.

Zadie’s estranged younger sister, Finn, can’t see into the future, but she has an uncannily good memory, so good that she remembers not only her own memories, but the echoes of memories other people have left behind. On the afternoon of her graduation party, Finn is seized by an “echo” more powerful than anything she’s experienced before: a woman singing a song she recognizes, a song about a bird…

When Finn wakes up alone in an aviary with no idea of how she got there, she realizes who the memory belongs to: Nora.

Now, it’s up to Finn to convince her sister that not only is their mom still out there, but that she wants to be found. Against Zadie’s better judgement, she and Finn hit the highway, using Finn’s echoes to retrace Nora’s footsteps and uncover the answer to the question that has been haunting them for years: Why did she leave?

But the more time Finn spends in their mother’s past, the harder it is for her to return to the present, to return to herself. As Zadie feels her sister start to slip away, she will have to decide what lengths she is willing to go to find their mother, knowing that if she chooses wrong, she could lose them both for good.

The Wilder Sisters…

My feelings for this book I feel are divided between characters and plot. First, I want to talk about the character’s. There are two main character’s, Zadie and Finn who are half sisters. The sisters were separated five years before when their mother left and never came back.  Zadie who was legally an adult was left on her own while her sister Finn was placed in foster care.

There are a few clues given at the start of their story regarding their personalities. Zadie is described as an organized person, while Finn is a free spirit. I really enjoyed their interactions. Finn was more bold, speaking to strangers without a second thought, eagerly agreeing to spontaneous invitations, and excited at every new discovery. It was because of Finn’s behavior that Zadie seemed to take on a more motherly personality, constantly giving Finn reminders to be cautious.

The tone of the story at first reminded me of Practical Magic (the movie with Sandra Bullock and Nicole Kidman), this story of family loyalty and betrayals because while the story is all about finding their mother, I kept being drawn in by Zadie and Finn’s different ideas of their mother and their abilities.

Expectations Dwindled..

Unfortunately the plot itself felt lacking for me. At first I thought the story was clear. Zadie did everything to pretend she was normal, shutting out her abilities. Meanwhile Finn seemed to use hers almost recklessly, never thinking of the consequences. I thought I was reading a story of self discovery and acceptance, that the sisters would learn more about their gifts and how it affected their relationships. However, it seemed the author was more focused on answering the question of where Nora Wilder was.

This was the part that felt strange, was when the character’s began to find answers. It felt too much like even the author wasn’t sure how to answer the question of “where is Nora Wilder?” Information that felt important didn’t seem to lead anywhere, and in the end I didn’t feel satisfied with the end of the journey. Although the plot reached its resolutions in one way or another, I didn’t feel like they made sense. I couldn’t shake the thought that the author didn’t really know how to end things and just did.

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Page Count: 329

Genres: Magical Realism, fantasy, contemporary fantasy

In the end although I wasn’t a fan of the Nora plot line, I did really like the sisters and their relationship and it made me want another story with them, specifically with Zadie who never really felt complete for me. It was Zadie specifically who I felt still had much more room to grow and as the story returned to Nora, Zadie’s struggles felt forgotten rather than resolved.

My Rating…

I liked the character’s, and the story did have some great moments during their journey, but I didn’t completely fall in love with this book. I was too confused by the direction it took which is why my personal rating for this book is three stars.

The next book I’ll be reading is “Riley Jordan and the Fire Prophecies: Lion of Fire” by Brittany Ranew, an indie author who sent me his book link on Threads.

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The Girl in the Storm by Christopher Stanfield

A poetically told story that needed a little more…

The Girl in the Storm is a contemporary fantasy focused on the arch angels including Michael, and Lucifer.

SYNOPSIS

Angels are real, demons walk the Earth, and she alone can stop the Devil…

Seventeen-year-old Genevieve Reidell loves to paint, and values her closest friends above all, but when a gunman terrorizes her high school, her near-reckless bravery sets her on a path that will change the entire course of her life. Her best friend is shot and dying but when Genevieve holds her, the bleeding stops and the wounds close.

But when she tries to save another friend, she can’t. Overcome with guilt Genevieve struggles to understand. But when a stranger arrives at her home with a mysterious book and an ominous warning, she learns about her destiny. Angels have protected her, but the time has come to unravel the mysteries that have haunted her for years. Genevieve must learn to harness and control her gifts and accept that whatever she does might not be enough. The Devil must be stopped, and Genevieve is ready to walk into the storm. She’s cheated death before, but can she save herself again without losing those she loves?

A Cinematic Experience…

I’m having trouble really describing this book so instead I want to share my experience. When I started the book I was impressed and at the same time confused by the way the story was being told. It’s told in a very cinematic way as if the scenes were edited, the chapter’s often going back and forth between present and a flashback often within a single page. In the first chapter we are told of the shocking thing that has occurred to the main character Genevieve as she tells her therapist.

The reason talking about this book feels so complicated is because I had a lot of contradicting thoughts about it. Like in the first half of the book I was very impressed by the storytelling. It’s captivating, and a the same time it was too much… poetry. The descriptions were detailed and poetic but I felt they went on too long sometimes and just wanted the story to continue.

Two Books in One…

I think the easiest way to explain is to talk about it like this. I felt like I read two books in one. The book is 437 pages, but I felt like book one ended on page 271 and book two started immediately after. For the first 60% of the book there’s a clear primary antagonist, and a clear book one antagonist. One threat acting for Lucifer who Genevieve must face.

She has obstacles to overcome, fears to face, and questions that need answers. But as the book seemed to be coming to a close I was really confused that I had so much of it left. From that page where I felt like book one ended all the way to the actual end, I consistently felt I was reading the sequel which is why I want to discuss this as two books instead of one. That being said book one was very interesting but I wished for a lot more, specifically with the character’s.

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Page Count: 437

Genres: Contemporary Fantasy, Dark Fantasy, Mythical Fantasy

My favorite part of any book is the character’s. I love the moment’s spent away from the main plot line. I love getting to know their personalities, their interests, their flaws. And book one only focused on the main plot so I had names and faces, but not much to make me form an attachment to the character’s. Book two on the other hand had much more depth with the character’s. I finally felt like I was getting to know Genevieve and the other angel’s, but suddenly it was all too fast. While I spent book one wanting it to move faster, I spent book two wishing it would slow down. Like I said, contradictory thoughts. But the true strength of this book is the writing.

A Poetic Writing Style…

The writing style reminded me a bit of Neil Gaiman, specifically American gods. It’s extremely detailed and often dove into the backstories of even the smallest character’s. For example at the start there is a shooter and later in the book, the author explores his day showing how he was led to the school that day. The most important thing I thought was that although it didn’t meet my priorities with character’s, I remember every detail of what I read and to me that means I was never bored. Because believe me, when I’m bored I retain absolutely nothing from the page. My hopes are that book two is a little more consistent with pace.

My Rating…

I thought this book was great but I can imagine how much better it could get which is why I’m looking forward to book two. I’ve decided that my personal rating is three stars because I enjoyed it, but I don’t think I will be rereading it.

The next book I’ll be reading is “Dark Corners” by Megan Goldin, a crime thriller.

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